Open Poetry #46 |
November Moonlight (#2) |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
November moonlight (#2) Listen oh so carefully for the gentle-dry rustle of ancient spirits passing through this deep forest serenity of frost-crisp leaves and mountain moonlight that fills all spaces between our hearts. Here, on this star-swept November eve, (as at the end of each life’s labyrinth) only the finest dreams and memories of love remain. --- b. e. adams (11/21/2010) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love the permanence in the beautiful chill that is November! It's almost like you embroider your words with great care, no matter how frayed they are around the edges. Always a fan, dreampoet~ |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
"(as at the end of each life’s labyrinth) / only the finest dreams and memories / of love remain." As it should be. Great writing. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful concise write Bruce. "Here, on this star-swept November eve, (as at the end of each life’s labyrinth) only the finest dreams and memories of love remain." I love that! Eric |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
That is beautiful... what a joy to read! Amaryllis |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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2gabby Junior Member
since 2010-11-21
Posts 23 |
love this imagery |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Always a fine read, we sure have to listen to nature carefully to understand it better. Fine writing, Bruce. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I know I can always count on you to deliver a fine poem! Excellent writing as always! ~ARH |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I can never get enough of your deep thoughts and lovely words, Bruce. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Always a pleasure to read your words. I often wonder what will remain with us at the end. I'm hoping you're right. Helen |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
enjoyed this a lot, jo |
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