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mikeandrew
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0 posted 2010-11-20 12:27 PM



And your laughter,ah,that seduces my heart.I promise you because whenever I turn to look at you I feel going completely speechless.my limbs loosen I am rattled .bittersweet,a crawling beast.You refreshed my heart that was burned by desire
And stole the sweetest breath from my chest.

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JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-11-20 08:32 AM


That isn't a bad way to be, Mike.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

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2 posted 2010-11-21 09:51 PM


like it!
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