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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2010-11-18 02:08 PM



    

~ lost ~


in the covered pool
of resort closed for winter
lost mallard ducks swim

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2010-11-18 02:21 PM


but they have each other...
one might consider this as found

enjoyed it ms

jwesley
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2 posted 2010-11-18 03:02 PM


Cool, my friend...

j

JerryPat
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3 posted 2010-11-18 03:28 PM


One thing about it, they won't have to share or fight over the food they find.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

ethome
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4 posted 2010-11-18 06:09 PM


Very interesting. Love the picture it makes for greater past meaning.

Eric

Misty Lilacs
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5 posted 2010-11-18 07:26 PM


Dark Shadow, If you look at it that way, I guess they aren't lost!!     Thanks!

ooxx

Misty Lilacs
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6 posted 2010-11-18 07:27 PM


jwesley, thank you. Yes, I suppose they are quite cool!
Thank you ...

ooxx

Misty Lilacs
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7 posted 2010-11-18 07:29 PM


JerryPat, they only have to share with each other. And since they are male and female, I'm sure they will!!

Thank you for commenting.

ooxx

Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2010-11-18 07:30 PM


Eric, great comment! Thank you ...

ooxx

Prasad Nataraj
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9 posted 2010-11-19 02:09 AM


Lovely Haiku and a pleasant serene romantic photo. They sure seem to be lost.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Margherita
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10 posted 2010-11-19 06:00 AM


So beautiful. I see that he is the leader exploring the path for her who follows trusting him, they have got possibilities surely.



Love,
Margherita

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11 posted 2010-11-23 01:48 AM


I guess they couldn't duck away for warmer climates - sorry, couldn't resist.

Happy Thanksgiving, Marti.

Alison

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