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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Layers Soft and warm As winter fur undercoat Gentle as down Open as a prairie skyline Tender as new shoots in spring Loving as young unweaned Some layers Dark as a new moon night Cold as mountain streams Stubborn as stone Other layers Caring as a mother hen Daring as a deer on the road Some Coarse as bark Smooth as sand Slick as ice Still others Dragonfly wing fragile Hidden as cat claws Afraid as prey pursued Fault lines Jaded and jealous Selfish and vain Ego and shame Shifting and twisting And yet Still be one Layer left Colorful as all things Reflective Painted by the sun |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful caleidoscopic layers that give the whole a harmonious aspect of our being. Very smart and reflective of your sensitivity. Love, Margherita  |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Layers. Ah, yes we have layers. Uncover them at your own risk. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serious sensations seem to ebb through this..enjoyed it ms |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine images reached my mind reading through these lines, ebm. Fine write. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I just love this kind of list poem with so many different colorful and intriguing metaphors. You is a GOOD! writer. Eric Margherita knows a word much longer than any word I know....LOL! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Margherita-Thank you so much for your generous and kind words ____________________________________________ Jerry-all this writing is a form of escavating and we uncover and reveal things all the time...Inadvertently or on purpose. Did I reveal too much here or not enough? ___________________________________________ D-thanks for the eyes here ____________________________________________ Thanks Prasad- I'm glad you are enjoying my writing. ____________________________________________ Eric- you is a good writer too... takes one to know one...so I will take that as a BIG compliment. Thank you very much |
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