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ThatOneGuy
Junior Member
since 2009-10-27
Posts 33
Indiana, United States

0 posted 2010-11-17 10:31 PM


Wind in a Chime


Here we are again
Despite distance and time
Wondering what could have been
Our words like wind in a chime

It hurt to see you shut that door
And still i can't help but think
You're the only one I'll reach for
Anytime I start to sink

I swore I'd never leave you
And I meant every word
Even as I stare at the wall
Wondering why you never call

But what if you were here?
Could we change our story?
Could we say those two words
We always wanted to hear?

Those thoughts haunt every day
I can't ever escape them
Constantly in my head to say
You know she left you for him

I always thought you'd be with me
Even through all this pain and time
Maybe someday our words won't be
Like the wind in a chime

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JerryPat
Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2010-11-17 10:58 PM


The thrill of the chase. The ecstasy of the fulfillment of the hunt. Now comes the heartbreak and sadness of the wronged.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2010-11-21 07:03 AM


Welcome to Passions.  Felt this.
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-11-21 12:03 PM


As cliche as it is, life is about choices, and how they shape our lives.

This is sadly beautiful, especially this....

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Wondering what could have been
Our words like wind in a chime

Welome here~


A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2010-11-22 06:06 AM


Heartfelt and filled with emotion, very passionate!

Look forward to reading more from you!

~ARH

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2010-11-22 06:50 AM


nicely done

reminded me of a friend I once knew

welcome to here

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2010-11-22 10:55 AM


Great title, Guy. Brought me in to read.

I'm glad that your posting again.

K

ThatOneGuy
Junior Member
since 2009-10-27
Posts 33
Indiana, United States
7 posted 2010-11-28 01:10 AM


Thanks guys you're feedback, as always, really means a lot to me
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