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Eusta B. Mae
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0 posted 2010-11-17 09:58 AM




I know
I’ve always been
Blown about
On the waves
Of the wind
Life comes to me
Like an anemone
Going with the flow
Hoping
It will sustain me


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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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1 posted 2010-11-17 10:28 AM


Ah, personally I think an anemone is absolutely beautiful. We're all anemones aren't we? Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-11-17 10:45 AM


Trina-I think they are beautiful too. My contrast I'm trying to make is that some people seem to have a go after what you want attitude as opposed to take what you get. Thanks for looking in on me.
JerryPat
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3 posted 2010-11-17 10:57 AM


A lot of us go after things, but in the long run have to take what we can get, ebm. That is certainly no failure.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Eusta B. Mae
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4 posted 2010-11-17 11:02 AM


Thanks for the pep talk
Amaryllis
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5 posted 2010-11-17 11:22 AM


I like this, ebm.  If you keep going after what you want, you may like what you do get that teeny much more!     Just my little Amaryllis take on it.

Be well, my friend~
A

Eusta B. Mae
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6 posted 2010-11-17 11:57 AM


Amaryllis-You make a good point thanks!

Prasad Nataraj
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7 posted 2010-11-17 11:57 AM


Fine writing, Ebm. The longer we pursue on certain goals the closer we might get.   

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Eusta B. Mae
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8 posted 2010-11-17 12:18 PM


Prasad-Thanks for the advice. ebm
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