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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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0 posted 2010-11-14 02:07 AM



I want to take a risk with you.
Though, I have taken some before
I know…
I’m risking being solely used
For pleasure and for nothing more…

The question I ask everyday
is “When do risks become risqué?”

*Amber

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2010-11-14 08:28 AM


When you blush. Or whisper.

Or cry.




Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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2 posted 2010-11-14 08:40 AM


when you miss your que and
lose the pleasure of using

you suggested submission here
but in fact you offer domination

cool stuff ms

Balladeer
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3 posted 2010-11-14 10:09 AM


Good question! Personally, I don't mind being used for pleasure....just can't get any takers!!!
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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4 posted 2010-11-14 10:57 AM


We all take from each other. It's better to take that which is given of course, but still . . . We are all takers.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

ethome
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5 posted 2010-11-14 12:36 PM


Clever little twist in the theme of this piece.
I have no answers.....LOL!

Write on!

Eric

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