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Open Poetry #46

Green Eyes Dancing

Paul D. Hennigan
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since 2009-02-03

Posts 52
Texas USA

0 posted 2010-11-13 12:49 PM

Magic dancing sensually in her green eyes
Flashes of brilliance gleam from her hair
Her smile makes even a stalwart heart fail
A kiss you steal from her lips if you dare

Can she weave a spell in the fashion of Merlin
Dance under the moonlight with me entwined
With her pale colored body reflecting starlight
And lips the deepest color of strawberry wine

Her body glides ever so softly through every tree
While I lie amazed on a bed of grass and ferns
Feverishly she sways to a million cricket violins
With my heart in my throat I feel myself burn

I stare into her eyes as she gazes down at me
Can this be a fever or does love feel this way
She falls to the ground exhausted in my arms
Will heaven let us always our hearts obey

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2010-11-13 07:16 AM

This full of beautiful sensuous metaphors.

Very very nicely done!!

Eric

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2010-11-13 04:15 PM

Ummm, yes.

LOL...Enjoyed, Sir!

Oh, I do so love having green eyes!

Paul D. Hennigan
Member

since 2009-02-03

Posts 52
Texas USA

3 posted 2010-11-13 09:59 PM

Thanks Eric and Sunshine glad you enjoyed!

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

4 posted 2010-11-15 08:39 AM

Fine writing, memorizing green eyes.
Her body glides ever so softly through every tree
While I lie amazed on a bed of grass and ferns
Feverishly she sways to a million cricket violins
With my heart in my throat I feel myself burn. Beautiful lines.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-11-15 09:05 AM

Very romantic! Liked this alot! ebm

Paul D. Hennigan
Member

since 2009-02-03

Posts 52
Texas USA

6 posted 2010-11-15 05:40 PM

thanks ebm, you are very good read also in the work you do.....Paul

Paul D. Hennigan
Member

since 2009-02-03

Posts 52
Texas USA

7 posted 2010-11-15 05:42 PM

prasad thanks a million for the kind words!

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