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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2010-11-12 11:29 PM


        Fire and Moonlight

As Winter paints eternal beauty
in each snow-soft forest evening,
across these endless hills
that talk against time,
(though perhaps it matters not)
know that my love for you
shall burn forever...
like fire and moonlight.

              --- b. e. adams (11/12/2010)

© Copyright 2010 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
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1 posted 2010-11-13 01:03 AM


There is nothing like a romantic poem done right.
                               Ida

JerryPat
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2 posted 2010-11-13 09:30 AM


This is as upfront and passionate as a lover could write. Simple. Direct. Profound.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2010-11-18 11:05 AM


Oh, there is the heart in the forefront here, dear Bruce, so beautiful!!

Love,
Margherita

ethome
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4 posted 2010-11-18 06:17 PM


Superb romantic lines. Love the set up of the beauty of winter.

Eric

DreamerSpirit
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5 posted 2010-11-19 01:05 AM


I loved this poem, very romantic!.
Thanks for sharing it.

Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2010-11-20 11:09 PM


Passionate writing and very direct. Fine writing,Bruce.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2010-11-20 11:30 PM


Aw love, in all it's timeless beauty!

Exquisite, as always!!

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2010-11-22 06:13 AM


Sizzling with romance...fan those flames...Mr. Romantic at his best!

~ARH

passing shadows
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9 posted 2010-11-22 06:41 AM


I can't wait for the snow!

beauty of a write!

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10 posted 2010-11-24 01:56 AM


Beautiful, Bruce.  Just beautiful.

Alison

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