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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2010-11-12 04:35 AM


There's love

and laughter

and life left...


I don't want to miss a thing.

Ask me if I'd do it twice

and I'll reply, "Im sure."

I take two fingers and I place

them on my neck and think

how much design

how much intrigue

there is beneath the boom-de-boom

and just the very thought of it

makes my pulse pound co-relate:


boom-de-boom-dee-boom-boom-boom


It's time to celebrate.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2010-11-12 09:24 AM


It's so good to read you.


Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-11-12 09:51 AM


Ditto! ebm
JerryPat
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3 posted 2010-11-12 02:27 PM


Ah, the "boom-de-boom" can stand repeating and doing again. Gotta love it.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Amaryllis
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4 posted 2010-11-12 05:39 PM


Ah!  I love it.     Great word-play.
.
~Amaryllis

latearrival
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5 posted 2010-11-13 12:12 PM


So good to be reading you again. Doing a little two step for ya.love , jo
Marchmadness
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6 posted 2010-11-13 01:01 AM


And there are those who would have us believe that all that design and intrigue just comes to an abrupt end. I think not.
Boom-de-boom.
                                 Ida

ethome
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7 posted 2010-11-13 07:08 AM


Celeste
I think if you keep on keeping on you'll just get better and better...Nice dedication!!

Love ya ya little Nawleans Belle.

Eric

Prasad Nataraj
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8 posted 2010-11-15 07:58 AM


Fine dedication, to a fine poetess.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Margherita
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9 posted 2010-11-16 07:13 PM


((((((((((Karen)))))))) oh yes you got that right. I am soooooooo happy for your awareness that life is full of precious opportunities ... to love, to laugh, to BE to BE, to BE ... in the flow of this grand design that includes our existence.

Reaching out with a big hug. This brought smiles and joy.

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
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10 posted 2010-11-16 08:22 PM


A lovely tribute to a fine lady.
serenity blaze
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11 posted 2010-11-16 10:52 PM


*smiling* Our dearest Margherita seems to live in "Aha" awareness?

Me? I had ONE in twenty years and felt the need to share it with her.

Love you, lady. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who gets excited checking her own pulse.

Capricious
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12 posted 2010-11-16 10:58 PM


Sounds like yer having a bit of arrhythmia there, maybe some PVCs ... lay off the caffeine, lady.  

I echo Sunshine's sentiment ... I admit I always look for names before titles, these days.

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2010-11-21 09:08 PM


Nice...James
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