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ken206573
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0 posted 2010-11-09 05:29 PM



somewhere in a child
there is a hidden forest
that is not tainted

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JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-11-09 05:40 PM


and the child will cling
forever to that forest
seeking love and hugs

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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2 posted 2010-11-09 06:09 PM


And the well-tended forest grew with the child... I still have mine     I liked this.
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Best~
Amaryllis

easy1
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3 posted 2010-11-09 06:10 PM


A very gooo haiku.
Bastet
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4 posted 2010-11-09 07:44 PM


Always happy to read haiku and this one has something deep to say. Thanks!
ken206573
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5 posted 2010-11-10 05:56 PM


To
Jerry Pat: thanks for the comment and haiku.
Amaryllis: thanks for reading and commenting
Easy1: happy that you loved the haiku
Bastet: glad you enjoyed it

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