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Eusta B. Mae
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0 posted 2010-11-08 01:11 PM



Outsider sees
The writing
On the wall
And wonders
Were those words
Meant for me

Bangers graffiti
Their property
Laying claim
For all to see
All is taken here
Between these lines
Is meant for me

And so some shoulders
Seem colder
Some eyes too green

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JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-11-08 01:31 PM


Must be some paranoia going round.
Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-11-08 01:36 PM


You too huh? LOL ebm
ethome
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3 posted 2010-11-08 04:36 PM


What type of creature were you captured by?

Cold shoulder, big green eyes,  oooooo I scared myself!!!

You're dang right, selfishly all meant for them.....

OFF WITH THEIR HEADS!!!!


Eric

Amaryllis
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4 posted 2010-11-08 08:37 PM


Lol... oh that is divine, ebm, I love it.  
Best~
Amaryllis

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5 posted 2010-11-08 09:25 PM


Hey! I wouldn't be paranoid if everybody didn't hate me!!!
passing shadows
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6 posted 2010-11-09 02:47 AM


let's just go down to the creek, get some stones, and rock 'em! That'll learn 'em!

I guess we all feel that way sometimes...just smile and walk by




Eusta B. Mae
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7 posted 2010-11-09 08:14 AM


Thank you all for being so understanding of my little piece of...well um...whatever. LOL
ebm

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