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hinged halo of autumn
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hinged halo of autumn |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the maple leaves are tattoos again brown and gold and some red ones still alive kind of ink they seem moving around on friendly ground there is distance in your voice now as you reach from tree limbs down playing god or perhaps godless again flirting is the nature of your nature I never did mind the arms length touch kind of like your rings in the ashtray with some individual trident protection so your mouth wouldn't be dry sounding when you smiled accidentally for my eyes and forgot you were wearing a dress as you exited the afternoon doorway using the ladder we leaned against dreams and climbed just high enough to be heavenly _______________ daark |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Oh D...Nobody inks it like you...and they say tattos are addictive...ebm |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I understand that heavenward climb. Very nice work. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...I love looking through you eyes here, at more than just words. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Your word play and imagery always amazes me. Enjoyed this. -Trina. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine writing Dark.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ebm, thanks lady friend ______________ jerrypatm thanks much jp, I appreciate your reviews __________________ ms martie, thanks little neighbor _________________ ms sinz, thanks babe for the eyes here ______________ prasad, thanks guy for the reads |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
You have some cool lines in this as usual ... the maple leaves are tattoos again, playing god or godless again, and forgot you were wearing a dress. Most people would be lucky to have one LINE, but three?!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks eb..you bless me sir |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
oops missed this one... captivating, as always from your pen, Daark~ ~A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms a'mary |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
You've definitely captured a moment with this one...  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks angel lady |
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