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Single-word Masterpiece |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey 
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There is nothing more attractive to me in this world than a man who can turn a single word into a poem. That shows proof that he puts thought into each and every syllable he dictates and every beautiful letter that flows out of his mind and through the tip of his fine black pen. He turns one word into a poem and I get a tiny surge of lust rush from my brain and down my core. He follows up by reading dozens of pieces of his art, composed of thousands of words, which coming from HIS mouth, sends an equivalent feeling of a thousand times the reaction to his single-word masterpiece originally. Ha.. I'd like to hear him tell me again that he doesn't tease me. *Amber |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I can relate. ebm |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
my my... truly one who could have such affect on another with words must be special indeed.. very softly sensual and pleasing enjoyed ma'm |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ah, the One-Word Master. I have heard of this mystical creature who walks the earth seducing our fair maidens who love and lust for poetry on the half shell. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
No fair... you should share...  . Amaryllis |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and the word is...imbue? anyway..you colored words and their addiction in lovely hues.. |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
Well.. his poem was as follows: "DEATH." [note the period.] He went on to explain in detail how that was actually a poem.. it was very attractive |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
viva! I can see that would awaken interest..the spirit voice of the budoka (samuari) looked at it as the beginning. If they used periods I would imagine it would be on the other end. it is cool though how you were swallowed into it. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very good, and so true too. Much enjoyed your thoughts~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
journey Eric |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Give me the word, Amber, and I'll give you a poem.  |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Sensual writing this. A word for a poem, may be we could use this idea at the poety workshop.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Wow...one word and `death` at that. Intriguing to say the least. |
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Donovan Callinan Junior Member
since 2010-08-01
Posts 37Omaha, Nebraska U.S. |
One word huh? Sounds like an interesting challenge. I'll have to think on that. Enjoyed your prose. |
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