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Donovan Callinan
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since 2010-08-01
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Omaha, Nebraska U.S.

0 posted 2010-10-31 08:17 PM



Sweetest Memory


I find earrings on the seat of my car.
It makes me smile.
I know exactly whose they are.

I can still feel her lips on mine.
They found me in the dark.
Tasting like the fire that follows sips of wine.

A force I could not resist.
I gave way to the moment,
A man unmoving moved by a kiss.

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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY
1 posted 2010-11-01 10:39 AM


Ah, such a sweet memory. A kiss hold so much power, doesn't it? Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-11-01 01:19 PM


Been down that road, that is for sure . . . Nicely done.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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Mi now
3 posted 2010-11-01 01:51 PM


I adore the weight of the image of the earrings left on the seat of the car... wonderful!  
Best~
Amaryllis

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4 posted 2010-11-01 04:26 PM


nicely done... enjoyed the look in.
Amberzlynnc
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5 posted 2010-11-02 03:32 AM


beautiful!
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