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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2010-10-29 07:34 PM


I did this for writers club, at school. The theme was nostalgia.

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Drip, drip, drip,
the rain falls gently outside.
The slow pitter-patter of the drops
quietly greet the windows with joy.

A little boy in a yellow jacket
and bright red boots jumps in the puddles.
Shrieks of happiness cut through
the quite noise of rain.

His mother sits in her favourite chair
with a cup of coffee, watching over her son.
A smile spreads across her face
as she witnesses wonderful simplicity.

Soon, the rain will come to an end
and the sun will show its face.
But for now we'll marvel
and be content in glory.


julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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1 posted 2010-10-30 08:32 AM


very sweet piece ma'am...

enjoyed reading you here.

ethome
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2 posted 2010-10-30 12:23 PM


Peaceful relaxing home spun piece.
Very enjoyable......

Eric

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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3 posted 2010-10-30 12:53 PM


Thank you both

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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