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I Watch The Sun Go Down
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I Watch The Sun Go Down |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I watch the sun go down and I wonder where you are. I watch the light dying staining the sky with reds and golds. Darkness creeping in... Darkness creeping in my heart... I cant imagine the sunrise ...without you. I cant imagine another breath ...yet it comes. Just like the sun. Another breath. Another day. I watch the sun go down ...and breathe. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sometimes it is very hard... but we have to remember to breathe. you've written something here of what it is to struggle through our day not sure we can..but finding out we do... enjoyed ma'am |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Although its one of the most beautiful things - the sunset, sometimes it seems cruel, that life goes on even if we're "stuck". Enjoyed this. -Trina. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
It is hard to imagine that one of the most natural things for us to do can be so hard at times. Good stuff here, truth well said. ebm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sometimes that breath is the hardest thing I do... |
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