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rebelrea
Junior Member
since 2010-10-22
Posts 20
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2010-10-24 08:36 PM


It's a little rough, I know. I just wrote it about 10 minutes ago, had to get it out.


I hate you
Do you know that?
I don't think you do

Sometimes I think you hate me
When you get that look in your eyes
And I'm afraid your going to hit me

Sometimes you do hit me
But most of time you restrain
I don’t know why though

Doesn't it feel good to let it out?
Show your power?
But I guess you do that with your hurtful words

Sometimes you bottle in your anger, I think
But I don't know when though
Because you always seem angry with me

Why do you treat me like this?
Is it cause I'm not what you wanted?
Sometimes I think so

Do you know the things I scream at you in my mind?
I don't think you do
Or else I probably wouldn't be here anymore

I cry in my room every night
Because of the things you say to me
You make me feel worthless

Sometimes I wish we could go back in time
When you didn’t treat me like this
And I still loved you
~RMB~

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2010-10-24 09:12 PM


You don't need to go back in time, honey. You need to go forward as fast and far away as you can.
                              Ida

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2010-10-25 07:23 AM


ouch

yes, it's time to move on

rebelrea
Junior Member
since 2010-10-22
Posts 20
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2010-10-25 06:56 PM


haha thanks guys, your right
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