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rebelrea
Junior Member

since 2010-10-22

Posts 20
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2010-10-23 06:27 PM

Thanks for reading

No one sees my world
it's impossibly unfair
If they had a look into my mind
they'd know it's really there

In my world it's music
dancing all around
In their world it's money
machines, obnoxious sounds

I never want to go there
step out my sacred place
In my world, we all win
in theirs, they lose the race

In my world were all equal
everyone has a say
In theirs they have controllers
who limit every day

In my world it's all nature
green trees, red dirt roads
In theirs it's all pollution
what's in the air, who knows?

If people only looked beyond
all their common ground
They might notice unique personality
waiting to be found

~RMB~

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

1 posted 2010-10-23 10:30 PM

i can very much relate to your words. Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2010-10-24 03:21 AM

nice attitude here! Love it!

AlexanderPoetry
Junior Member

since 2006-07-31

Posts 30

3 posted 2010-10-25 03:19 PM

Good message with an easy flow.

Nice one.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2010-10-25 03:29 PM

Very nice, young lady. I'm liking
your attitude...hmmm, now where did
I put that UP poem of mine to share
with you?

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2010-10-25 06:25 PM

Your world seems wonderful. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Gunslinger
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 901
TX, USA

6 posted 2010-10-28 05:43 PM

Albert Schweitzer said, "The spirit of this age is dissonance, in tones, in lines and in thought. That shows how far from thinking it is, for thinking is a harmony within us." While Schweitzer said much I do not agree with, I can find no fault in this observation. From the tone of your excellent piece, you are obviously a thinker. Congrats.

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