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Open Poetry #46

walking with the angels

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2010-10-23 12:44 PM

I was walking with that small surprise
Of wind that took the men of the stores
With their wingtip shoes, business suits
Stopping them in the tracks of the rain

Where the trains and left lanes
Pleased the quiet skies,
Touched the lights of each apartment
Stacking up on one another,

I walked with a sudden siege of clarity
Of a walk that touched the kinds of people I loved
That I wanted to care about, to care for the hidden gems
And rocks that took the alleys and found truth in my heart

Truth for whatever type of person I was
And I still didnÕt know. I still didnÕt know what my face resembled
So sometimes I just need to stop and think about it.

Sometimes I need to just walk with the angels,
Walk alone, where the world is watching.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2010-10-23 05:26 PM

I walked with a sudden siege of clarity

~*~

I enjoy those immediate moments...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2010-10-24 03:15 AM

well done

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2010-10-24 05:21 PM

Thanks Sunshine and Passing.

Yes, Sunshine, those moments can be very memorable

Cheers

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-10-25 03:59 PM

Where the trains and left lanes
Pleased the quiet skies,
Touched the lights of each apartment
Stacking up on one another,

I especially enjoyed the passage above..

nicely done...

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

5 posted 2010-10-25 04:15 PM

Thanks, Cpat...appreicate the kind words.

Cheers

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