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Open Poetry #46

Crown of Gold Haiku

Prasad Nataraj
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Bangalore,India

0 posted 2010-10-21 09:45 AM

Blood flows through petals,
Soothing tender crown behold,
Sprinkle dust of gold.

©Prasad.N 12th July 2010.
All rights reserved to Prasad.N
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Sunshine

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1 posted 2010-10-21 04:52 PM

yellow gold and red
leaves briskly frisk around heads
children jump with joy

~*~

I borrowed this from me
to share with you, my friend.

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2010-10-21 11:22 PM

This is an exquisite haiku, so very lovely, truly.

It's great to read you again, Prasad~

Prasad Nataraj
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Bangalore,India

3 posted 2010-10-22 05:25 AM

Thank you for this beautiful haiku, love it. Appreciate your comment my friend.

Thank you for your kind words Blue, appreciate it.

easy1
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Southeastern USA

4 posted 2010-10-22 05:38 AM

Very nice.

There are many possible interpretations, but I see a red hibiscus flower, because we sometimes have those here.

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-10-22 06:58 AM

Love that first line. Sets up the entire ponder very well.

Eric

Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2010-10-23 12:50 PM

Thank you Mark for your kind comments. Brillant, it is about the red hibiscus. Appreciate it.

Thank you Eric for you kind words. Appreciate it.

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2010-10-23 04:32 PM

Excellent Haiku, Prasad.
Ida

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8 posted 2010-10-23 05:37 PM

Very beautiful, Prasad!

Prasad Nataraj
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9 posted 2010-10-23 10:27 PM

Thank you Ida for your kind words. Appreciate it.

Thank you Sir, great to read your comments. Appreciate it.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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