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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
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0 posted 2010-10-20 05:13 PM



today is warm, sweet
filled with the sky
mixed in passion pink
and a sun that's
bright as a
bloody orange
I feel so at ease
though everything
else is tense
I hope my family is well
and bright like this autumn day


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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2010-10-20 08:55 PM


Sweet thoughts to go with such a beautiful day~

The fall is so clear and cleansing, when the
leaves are dying off it breathes new life.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
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2 posted 2010-10-21 08:36 AM


today is warm, sweet
filled with the sky
mixed in passion pink
and a sun that's
bright as a
bloody orange

Love this image! ebm

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
Posts 487

3 posted 2010-10-21 01:07 PM


To Blues Serenade thanks for your comment I'm glad you enjoyed the poem on such a beautiful day.


ken206573
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4 posted 2010-10-21 01:09 PM


To Eusta B. Mae thanks for your comment and enjoying the image of such a warm autumn day.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2010-10-21 07:30 PM


Nice...James
ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
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6 posted 2010-10-23 04:40 PM


To James thanks for reading my poem.
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