Open Poetry #46 |
October |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Autumn— High up On a leafless branch A robin calls Autumn— In fading light The white house silent Autumn— Blue sky— Beyond North Green Bay Distant maples Autumn— Above the changing willow A snowy moon . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm.... Is there a political overtone [undertone?] here? Enjoyed, John. Thank you! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I love the simple stark imagery here. ebm |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful yann |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Perfectly brilliant in every way!! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yep. I read political overtones here also. Nice work. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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