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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-10-18 01:26 PM


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Autumn—

High up
On a leafless branch
A robin calls

Autumn—

In fading light
The white house silent

Autumn—

Blue sky—
Beyond North Green Bay
Distant maples

Autumn—

Above the changing willow
A snowy moon


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1 posted 2010-10-18 11:20 PM


Hmmm....

Is there a political overtone [undertone?] here?

Enjoyed, John. Thank you!


Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-10-19 09:36 AM


I love the simple stark imagery here. ebm
Brad Majors
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3 posted 2010-10-26 06:14 PM


nice!
2islander2
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4 posted 2010-10-31 03:10 PM


beautiful

yann

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5 posted 2010-10-31 03:14 PM


Perfectly brilliant in every way!!
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6 posted 2010-10-31 05:37 PM


Yep. I read political overtones here also. Nice work.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

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