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Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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0 posted 2010-10-18 10:10 AM

Would that I could be a woodland nymph
Dressed in the river's misted moon glow
Would that one be there lost in shadowed thought
That I might charm a heavy heart into lightness
Filling your textures and your touch
May that I be that magic upon your mind
That you feel your soul at river's edge
Smiling at the moon

easy1
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since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-10-18 02:26 PM

Nicely composed. Sometimes the Moon is the only visible smiling companion.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-10-18 02:50 PM

easy1- yes, and a fine companion at that!

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2010-10-18 07:21 PM

The moon is everyone's inspiration!
Just lovely! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2010-10-19 05:16 AM

lost in shadowed thought...

yep, that would be me

nice write!

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-10-19 08:09 AM

katahdin-I'm glad you liked it, thanks for letting me know. ebm

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

6 posted 2010-10-19 08:11 AM

passing shadows-glad you could relate to something in this piece. Thanks! ebm

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2010-10-19 04:32 PM

Well, you've woven the river into this..which of course appeals to me, since the river seems to speak to me in my own scribbles quite often..

I'm traveling this week, and am in Memphis, next to the Big Muddy... who sings her own kind of songs..
enjoyed this ma'am...

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

8 posted 2010-10-20 08:05 AM

I'm glad you liked it...I think all your river poems may have planted a seed. Thanks for the eyes here. ebm

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2010-10-21 11:28 PM

This is so full of wonder.... made me go out and look for the moon.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

10 posted 2010-10-25 08:13 AM

Blues! what a wonderful way to respond to a poem!!! Thank you for telling me. Hugs! ebm

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2010-10-26 07:17 PM

Silky...James

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

12 posted 2010-10-27 08:16 AM

Thanks James!

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