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Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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0 posted 2010-10-18 08:14 AM

Driftwood gave way under the attention
Knowing this too
Wouldn't last
Feeling so good was an act of submission

As he worked his way under what was left of her bark
Her resolve
Turned to pulp
Blinded by his lighting she got lost in his dark

When he put on the oil to bring out her sheen
She swayed
Like wind through her willows
When she was tall and beautiful and very,very green

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-10-19 04:30 PM

I like what you've done here.. the wouldn't last, the very very green, indicating the somewhat doubtful outcome in Driftwoods mind and the learned experience....

I am a fan of the series...and am enjoying to look in to see where it goes next.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-10-20 08:08 AM

Bless your heart! Seems you're the only fan left! Thanks for hanging in there! ebm

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-10-21 06:59 PM

I wouldn't worry about it too much.. looks like a lot of pieces aren't getting many comments... and I do enjoy the series...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2010-10-21 07:47 PM

Enjoyed...James

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-10-25 08:14 AM

Thanks James! ebm

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2010-11-08 06:48 PM

One never knows who is going
to open up a page or thread
here at PiP...

if it feels good...write it.

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

7 posted 2010-11-08 06:55 PM

The last gasp of Driftwood is is majestic thoughts of when and then . . . Superb writing . . . I can see this illustrated on the opposite page of the poem, and no, Cpat is not the only fan left as you can plainly see.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

8 posted 2010-11-09 08:25 AM

Jerry and Karilea. Bless your hearts! Hugs!
Thank you, thank you! I'm still so new to all this, learning as I go...you have renewed my confidence!

Dakota
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since 2000-05-25

Posts 125
New York

9 posted 2010-11-14 06:35 PM

I look forward to the next twist in your series!

Nice!

Dave

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

10 posted 2010-11-15 09:16 AM

Thanks Dave...Driftwood VIII is around somewhere pg 2 probably. ebm

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