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zeusthamghty
Junior Member
since 2010-06-20
Posts 45
west virginia, usa

0 posted 2010-10-16 12:29 PM



When I look into your eyes
I see something looking back
That I have not seen before.
I see a love that is much stronger
Than I have ever felt.

When I look upon your face
I feel things that no one else
Has ever made me feel.
I feel a love
That makes me
Week in the knees.

When you look at me
It feels like you can
Se straight into my soul,
It is a wonderful feeling.

You make me happier
Than I have been
In a very long time
And there is nothing that
Will ever tear
These feelings away.

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katahdin
Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-10-17 07:42 PM


Hope the feelings last!
Kat >^..^<

zeusthamghty
Junior Member
since 2010-06-20
Posts 45
west virginia, usa
2 posted 2010-10-20 05:28 PM


yeah me too

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