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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2010-10-09 05:36 PM



Not very inspired tonight
as the darkness shines so bright
hoping that those starlit paths
don't lead to doomsday
as they so often do

wrenching at my own guilt
meaningless of course

the words I said
the delusions I fed
scream back at me now

and my own worst enemy

GUILT

pulls the trigger

I'm DEAD....

as if turned inside
upside down and backwards

the words 'I love you'
go long forgotten
while hate reaches a thousand hearts

seemingly to late now
for a fresh start
I try to find a way to

soften...

my hard heart

~~~kingsangel~~~

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2010-10-09 05:43 PM


We sleep..we are numb... and at times we are indifferent.. but to feel hate, one can also feel love..and we are not dead.

your words ache ma'am... from someplace deep within...


Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2010-10-09 07:19 PM


and I feel guilty about the most simplest complex stuff if that makes any sense....but yes it is deep .... still waiting to exhale actually becuz I've been holding my breathe for so long ..... Thank you for your reply ....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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3 posted 2010-10-11 06:49 AM


We all have to remember how to breathe...
you can only hold your breath for so long and then you turn blue~

While I like blue...I am sure you look a lot prettier in shades of smiles....

as for the worry part, we all seem to worry too much and let ourselves get caught in the trap of making even the simple complex...

best to you ma'am....

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-10-12 09:47 AM


ak...look backs suck the life out of us...(that is why a good scooter doesn't back up much) relax and just spend the spokes babe
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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5 posted 2010-10-12 06:31 PM


To hate, to love - is to feel. Not dead, perhaps frozen from guilt, but fear not. With this beautiful write, I sense the ice is melting.

-Trina.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

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