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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-10-07 01:23 PM

I wonder of your eyes when they are perhaps
just glancing at the dark colors before dawn
when you smile at cocoa sipping suggestions
and bring a shiver that shimmers under neon

when you turn your back to your own footsteps
and linger closer to man made moon light
just to cast a whispered glow of woman ways
and does your shadow carry perfume like you

letting it drift across an imagined sea smile
and up over the onto of leather lathered stones
like a left over kiss that was just brought along
in case there was a place in day dreams remaining

and only you could plant in that wanting garden

_____________

daark

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-10-07 01:30 PM

one always has to wonder about the spare kiss that might be brought along...

nice read Sir..and as always your touch is deft and the wording uniquely yours.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-10-07 01:32 PM

thanks amigo..it is a pleasure to receive your reviews

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

3 posted 2010-10-07 02:20 PM

I always look forward to reading one of your works and am never disappointed. A beauty for sure.

~Sunkissed

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2010-10-07 02:38 PM

ms sunkiss...thanks lady friend

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2010-10-08 10:16 AM

quote:
and does your shadow carry perfume like you

letting it drift across an imagined sea smile

Awesome, dear D.! One of those poetic expressions that make we want to squeak in pleasure

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-10-08 12:08 PM

ms mar...I would enjoy the sound...of your squeak..thanks ms

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2010-10-08 12:46 PM

I wonder too, and remember the shadows drifting lazily.
But mostly I remember how riveting those moments were.

Love and warm hugs always, D~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2010-10-08 01:29 PM

babyblue..thanks babe...enjoy the sun this weekend..maybe I will see you on the 101..

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

9 posted 2010-10-09 07:47 AM

I love the line `Does your shadow carry perfume like you`, Where do you get such lines?

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2010-10-12 01:06 PM

EB...I just hear them from everything that speaks I guess...in my mind's ear everything/everyone has a voice.

Thanks guy

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