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Roselily
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Roselily |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Roselily Put a flower in your sweet hair To wear The bee`ll be pleased - beware! I declare You`ll be devastating Scrumptious and breathtaking Prepare a flower for your hair I do swear You`ll be lovely beyond compare Comb not those unkempt raven locks Of knots We`ll let custom frown from its box My sweet fox Let fools be simplistic Dumb and antagonistic Why be boring and orthodox? A Xerox? When you set the world on its clock? Put a flower in your unkempt hair Roselily, so lovely and fair |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Delightful! ebm |
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Yuka Member
since 2010-08-19
Posts 71china |
i have to say to me seems a little bit hard to understand |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such pleasant, creative wordplay, delightful indeed, dear Earl. A flower in the hair is such a romantic detail, it becomes every woman I think, but we do not dare to wear one most of the time, I fear. Maybe in the intimacy of home it can be done. Just bought a beautiful lilac silk flower the other day because I liked it, I am sure I will never use it though. But I did try it on my hair  ... Enjoyed this much. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh yea, this was fun and fancy free. love the look!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a pleasure to read EB |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
THIS is a love poem! Nice.... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this is very romantic Earl... yes, a love poem. Margherita, please wear the flower. every woman should wear a flower in her hair at least once. ask Earl. |
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Yuka Member
since 2010-08-19
Posts 71china |
by the way Brinkman,have you ever been to your country's ASHIKAGA GAKKO (×ãÀûѧУ),Japanese oldest's university?about it'status do you have any detail information or pictures? if you have, could you please send some to me by mail my account yuka_chen@hotmail.com ? anyway, thank you )) |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Fun & Romantic indeed. Enjoyed. Makes me want to put a flower in my hair. -Trina. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Earl, I really enjoyed this...a bit of western meeting eastern... this is charming! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
This is indeed a delightful read. Fun use of words and fun images it congers up. Thanks Earl for this one. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Nice work on this one, Earl. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Just delightfull! Loved the rhymes! Kat >^..^< |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I bow to you and yours. A fine mixture of fun, love, and attitude.  "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Changing times well expressed. Fine writing, Earl. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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