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Open Poetry #46
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2010-10-04 08:13 PM



She saw her napkin slightly fold.
The crumbs slowly rolled off the corner of the table
As her knees touched the top of the table,
With her lavender dress guising the floor
Changing its color as the men slowly walked by.

She touched her eyes,
Slowly tying them around the brightly colored lights.
Her slight smirk off the right of her mouth,
Like a passenger waving to the people in the street.

It was here,
between the indexes of her thumbs,
she circled her fingers anxiously.
As the rain poured,
It tussled and turned
Bringing the gravity of people
Around the center of her eyes
Like the light that enters a cave as it slowly wakes,
Slowly, her napkin politely folded.

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Bellelady1981
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since 2010-09-15
Posts 12
Louisiana USA
1 posted 2010-10-04 09:28 PM


WOW THAT WAS GREAT!
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