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vandana
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0 posted 2010-09-30 05:24 PM



Everything Is Alright
Everything is alright
You say
When morning comes along
Birds starts to sing
Where my heart rings
As the clock strikes
Waking up
With a warm sun
Look at it
I smile through the morning
And yet time has come
To show me its way
Everything's alright
Finding a love so true
Where my heart is in love again
Yes,
Everything is alright
I know
My heart wants to beat again
Smile back at the memories we shared

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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-09-30 05:38 PM


This is a wonderfully positive attitude, dear Vandana!

Love,
Margherita

OldBuddyOldPal
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2 posted 2010-09-30 06:00 PM


so optimistic and I love how it flows!!
easy1
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3 posted 2010-09-30 09:05 PM


Upbeat and appreciated... It's not that easy to stay so optimistic. "Let the world turn without you tonight..." and see, there's the sun rising all the same! Beautiful!
Bastet
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4 posted 2010-10-01 02:36 AM


Yes, a courageous way of approaching this subject. An encouraging attitude for yourself and others.
Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2010-10-01 07:21 AM


Enjoyed! a very sweet piece, with lots of hope.


Eusta B. Mae
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6 posted 2010-10-01 08:30 AM


Sweet! ebm
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