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Open Poetry #46

Driftwood

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-09-30 03:00 PM

Driftwood lies upon the golden sand
Whiskey in her suntanned hand
Contemplating letting go
Giving in to the undertow

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-09-30 03:38 PM

Nice little piece that let's the reader do what they would with the metaphor...

enjoyed ma'am, as always

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-09-30 03:41 PM

very much appreciate your eyes and words, as always...ebm

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-09-30 06:59 PM

It is the call for oneness with All there is ...

golden sand and suntanned hand
create the contrast to "driftwood" ... all things transform and yearn to dissolve into light filled vastness.

Inspiring, dear Eusta!

Love,
Margherita

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

4 posted 2010-10-01 02:55 AM

Oh, wonderful. I picture this piece of driftwood as a mermaid with long hair trailing on the sand. A lovely vision.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2010-10-01 07:28 AM

AHA....good one!

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

6 posted 2010-10-01 08:07 AM

Margherita-I'm glad my little poem said so much to you! ebm

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

7 posted 2010-10-01 08:09 AM

Bastet-Thanks for sharing your vision. ebm

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

8 posted 2010-10-01 08:10 AM

Sunshine- thanks my dear friend!

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

9 posted 2010-10-04 08:56 AM

Eusta, Enjoyed reading both poems. I like your style.

Very well done!

~Sunkissed

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

10 posted 2010-10-04 09:01 AM

Thank you Sunkissed, I hope Driftwood continues to please. ebm

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

11 posted 2010-10-14 12:40 PM

VERY good one!

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