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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-09-29 11:51 AM



oh lavender lawyer
and lying voice of dawn
guiding my mind beyond
these leather lathered letters

like the seeing eye
tumble weed rolling stones
that worship the soothing round
woman, cold curved and curious

unstring your bow now
and stand tall in highway stilettos
reveal the dangerous bosom's swell
when the blind men are metal

you shiver in voice
and quivers of your arousal
are but arrows falling from your fingers
not for the luck of plucking plunk

but just the echoing of your empty canyons

______________

daark (highway series)canyon ride midnightish


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Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-09-29 12:58 PM


D- There is nothing like taking a ride with you...enjoyed! ebm
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-09-29 01:25 PM


thanks ms ebm
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2010-09-29 01:34 PM


Seems to me this speaks of sirens and sailors too sir... but at midnight in the canyons, your eyes have ot be open and she can steal your mind...

good stuff amigo... always enjoy the journey and the talent

bel1e
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4 posted 2010-09-29 01:52 PM


uuuuuuuuo~  a tongue twister~  LOL

gotta love it~

             

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2010-09-29 02:19 PM


cpat..thanks guy...true stuff..although the blindness of the canyons at that hour is a very special dance.

_______________

bb-bel1e..grins..was trying to capture the rhythm of the curves...thanks babe

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BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2010-10-01 08:04 PM


Love the sound of those stelletos in the stillness.
I love how you take the curves and what you do in the dark.

Nice ride, dude!!

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2010-10-02 06:53 AM


babyblue...bet you would look hot in the same light...thanks babe
Margherita
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8 posted 2010-10-03 09:02 AM


Outstanding, overwhelmingly beautiful!

I quiver in appreciation.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-10-04 07:21 AM


ms mar...perhaps some day you will ride one of these canyons..thanks ms
Sunkissed
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10 posted 2010-10-04 08:44 AM


Of course the title caught my eye! *chuckles* Enjoyed the words and your unique point of view.

~Sunkissed

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2010-10-04 01:39 PM


ms sunkiss...thanks lady friend..
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