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Eterne
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since 2010-07-21
Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2010-09-26 01:50 PM



Last night you were with me:
I kissed your eyes and your lips
and I cuddled close to your your chest,
happy with your presence,
surrounded by your scent
and the warmth of your body.
You didn't do anything,
just murmured "sweet dreams, baby";
but I've been dreaming already,
sending you my love as falling asleep,
while your body was somewhere else,
far away from me...

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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-09-26 07:13 PM


Invokes a feeling of cozyness and contentment.
Well done! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2010-09-27 04:05 AM


makes me wish my husband was here

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
Posts 903

3 posted 2010-09-27 08:29 AM


Made me appreciate mine. ebm
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