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pinkfrog462
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since 2010-09-24
Posts 26
Arizona

0 posted 2010-09-24 06:41 PM


Illusion

The room is silent
All I can hear is my heart beating
I feel as if
My life is defeating
I try to stand up
I want on my own
But my inner most thoughts
Are quite unknown
I shun the world
I hide from within
I see her
My twin
She stands tall
Mighty and proud
As she enters
Goes wild the crowd
I inflict this deep sorrow
And she lets out a scream
Then I awake
She was only a dream

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Novus_Os
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since 2010-07-21
Posts 115
West Coast, USA
1 posted 2010-09-25 01:04 AM


Powerful. The dream turned into a nightmare.
I can feel the deep set emotion, and sorrow here. Well done.

Regards,

Novus_Os

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

pinkfrog462
Junior Member
since 2010-09-24
Posts 26
Arizona
2 posted 2010-09-25 01:30 PM


thank you!

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