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Eusta B. Mae
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0 posted 2010-09-24 03:00 PM




Boredom bares its fangs
Briefly before burying
Them deep within
Dormant dreams and desires
Deviousness rises
To the occasion
Letting its hair down
Rapunzel rappelling
Her tower wall
To seduce a stranger
For something to do.

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Dark Stranger
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West Coast
1 posted 2010-09-24 03:48 PM


always a treat to see a lady let her hair down...
Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2010-09-24 03:50 PM


This brings smiles, great association with the fairy tale. Very cute.

Love,
Margherita

Eusta B. Mae
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3 posted 2010-09-24 03:53 PM


D-Thanks for the eyes here...
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Margherita- Glad you had fun with it!

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
4 posted 2010-09-25 08:03 PM


I like how you wrote from Rupunzel's point of view. Must hve been really boring up there alone! Nice!
Kat >^..^<

Sunshine
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5 posted 2010-09-25 08:09 PM


Smiling with this...

it's always more interesting
on the greener side of the tower.




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6 posted 2010-09-26 10:38 AM


(chuckling) boredom.... what is the old saying? Idle hands are the devils playground?

nice piece ma'am...and regardless of what side of the tower the grass seems greener on
eventaully it will still need to be mowed.

Eusta B. Mae
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7 posted 2010-09-27 08:08 AM


katahdin-Glad you enjoyed my version of the tale.
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Sunshine- I don't think it was grass she was after...LOL
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Capat- (laughing) good point about the mowing. Then again, you could let it grow
into hay and roll in it...

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