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btwn luv and lies
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btwn luv and lies |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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Is it too soon to say I love you? do you hear my heart whispering... through the lies that are spoken so clearly... by a heart slaved by torment??? it whispers I need you chemistry spoke a thousand words to our beating hearts and then was silent or maybe just whispering to low to hear through the lies that are spoken so clear... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I'm liking your style-painfully to the point. Ouch, I felt that! ebm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel...time should never matter on matters of the heart..kewl pen ms |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
EBM....my poetry screams bitterness but it is such good therapy glad you enjoy it thanks a bunch for your wonderful comments... Dark Stranger ... time? well that's a whole other topic....somewhere between hurry up and wait and its never too late lol ... thank you for reading I enjoy your comments very much!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sometimes the best chocolate is bittersweet... I find reading your words to be much the same... enjoyed ma'am... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you I am glad u enjoyed and to you the same kind sir!!!  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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