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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2010-09-23 01:07 PM


no words to describe it
that haven't already been said
jealousy described so much easier
on the lies that are bled

i touched u and i knew
true love had found me
when i wasn't ready
my mind bent
twisted
from the games
that false love played

now i have found that love again
in the midst of my fears
the nightmare plays over again

that true love will hurt me

eventually

and i do not want to live

just

to see

true love die....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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rosepetals36
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since 2010-07-09
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1 posted 2010-09-23 01:37 PM


I used think happiness when I used to think of love.. now fear is what comes to mind first. Love can be way to harsh sometimes.

I liked.

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
Posts 903

2 posted 2010-09-23 03:02 PM


Oh girl, you be singing the baggage song. I know the name of that tune. (arg) Great job!
ebm

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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3 posted 2010-09-24 03:19 PM


Thank you for the comments ... its the rubbish that false love leaves behind that is so hard to shed and leaves me without inspiration on that topic.....take care and bless you both for your comments....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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