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Open Poetry #46

Ocean Journey

Novus_Os
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 115
West Coast, USA

0 posted 2010-09-22 01:53 AM

Looking out at the ocean, I let memories go.
Drifting away softly, with the tides ebb
and flow.This momentary mystery, of life,
is left to history.Others can deduce,
and others may decide. I stare across the
rolling waves, with my eyes opened wide.
Glorious it is, to bask in such wonders.
As thoughts churning inside focus sharp
on past blunders. The time it is now to cut
away built up pride, cast out the ego, to turn out
the inside. I seek some small solace, and in
silence I cope. To grasp love through distant
haze, I hang on to hope. Some way,
I'll find it, all will come in due course.
Perhaps finding insight,in viewing the source.

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2010-09-22 02:22 AM

Nice read, loved the first two lines and the last line finished it off nicely. Enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-09-23 08:27 AM

Loved the setting, the rhyme and the last line...reminded me of me...enjoyed! ebm

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