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naturegirl
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0 posted 2010-09-20 07:46 PM



Midnight music played
with complicit passion.
Bow taught, drawn
lovingly against firm
flesh. Soft sighs
echo, ephemeral whispers
mingling with birdsong.
Dawns chorus begins

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1 posted 2010-09-21 07:09 AM


sensual...and enjoyable..


Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-09-21 08:08 AM


I like! ebm
Margherita
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3 posted 2010-09-21 10:59 AM


Lovely! It sounds like a long passionate night, out of the norm, insofar sleep wasn't the option.

Very nice.

Love,
Margherita

naturegirl
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4 posted 2010-09-21 05:35 PM


thank you all ...what can I say if you can, do!
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5 posted 2010-09-24 11:45 PM


Way to go, naturegirl.
                  Ida

Novus_Os
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6 posted 2010-09-25 12:32 PM


mingling with birdsong.
Dawns chorus begins


Love it. Bright and warm. Like the qualities
of a good tune.

Regards,

Novus_Os

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

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7 posted 2010-09-25 09:54 AM


Very nice picture painted here, miss. Nothing like a taut beau! ; (or taught beau, even!)
naturegirl
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8 posted 2010-09-28 07:30 PM


thank you for your kind replies - just experimenting with different styles to see what I can & can't do
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