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Eusta B. Mae
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0 posted 2010-09-20 08:10 AM



The thin line
The one between

Finding yourself
And
Losing your mind

The truth you believe
And
The truth you find

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1 posted 2010-09-20 08:31 AM


(chuckling) brings to mind the whole idea... of is truth an absolute or simply the perception we are able to hold on to from where we are...

enjoyed your write ma'am...

Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-09-20 08:44 AM


Exactly my point sir...One can only hope that the truths we find are not to far fetched from the ones we have come to believe...those transitions of perspective (should we choose to accept them) can be unsettling
Earl Brinkman
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3 posted 2010-09-21 10:17 AM


I like this but I have to admit that I stray over the thin line at times.
Margherita
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4 posted 2010-09-21 11:06 AM


Neat stuff, lady Eusta.

Beliefs can be treacherous.

Love,
Margherita

Eusta B. Mae
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5 posted 2010-09-21 01:19 PM


Earl, Don't we all? (and hope nobody notices) LOL  ebm
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so true Margherita and ignorance is dangerous.  Thanks for the read! ebm

naturegirl
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6 posted 2010-09-21 05:37 PM


Oh I know that line very well, sometimes I forget which side I'm on...like this very much, simple but sooo true!
Julie

Eusta B. Mae
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7 posted 2010-09-22 10:45 AM


Naturegirl-LOL Me too!  Glad you could relate thanks for the read.  ebm
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