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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-09-19 10:02 PM



Getting to Know You

Suppose you liked me
and I liked you
I wonder where
that would take us two
Suppose we got together
on a Saturday night
I took you home
lit some candles
and turned out the lights
Wonder what would happen
please tell me
if you will,
sensually
how would
you feel.

JamesLee
18September
2010


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Krishankins
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1 posted 2010-09-20 12:31 PM


That is the best "what if" that I've seen in a while.
Margherita
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2 posted 2010-09-21 10:31 AM


The romantic scene is set well, dear James! Dreamy thoughts.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2010-09-22 07:28 PM


Thank you Krishankins and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James
Sunshine
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4 posted 2010-09-22 08:40 PM


Of course, James, now I have the song from the King & I running through my head.

And of course, James, that you're in Hawaii doesn't help my memories stay away from the beauty of the islands, and the magic they gifted me only two years ago.

I wanted to thank you, too, for peeking into the Prose forum.

I enjoyed this. Thank you.


katahdin
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5 posted 2010-09-22 11:20 PM


Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Eusta B. Mae
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6 posted 2010-09-23 08:17 AM


Ditto! ebm
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