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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-09-15 10:30 AM


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Putting my tee shirt on
I see you in the mirror

You are beautiful

There is  nothing
More to say


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© Copyright 2010 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
rosepetals36
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1 posted 2010-09-15 11:23 AM


Sweet right

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
2 posted 2010-09-21 11:24 PM


This really should collect more readers.  It is quite good.
katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
3 posted 2010-09-22 12:41 PM


Short but sweet! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

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4 posted 2010-09-22 08:21 AM


Geez, John. You're a nice enough fellow but you don't look THAT good!
Huan Yi
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5 posted 2010-09-22 10:27 AM


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Thanks all

The best poems are given to me . . .
I do nothing more than write them down

Mike, if I thought I looked that good
I would have already drowned

Thanks again

John

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Eusta B. Mae
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6 posted 2010-09-22 10:50 AM


Simply beautiful. ebm
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