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Half a Bubble Past
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Half a Bubble Past |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Half a bubble past A pipe dream Leaning on the fence Looking at their rainbows Before their time is spent My grass is green enough The color of content Standing storms of restless winds And bubbles blown awry |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Bravo to bubbles and pipe dreams .... we all have em and most of us are living in our own bubble aren't we ? ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Angel4aKing1 Yes, Ma'am! and even if our bubbles are a little off plumb, thats okay too. ebm |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
I really like the minimalist, haiku-like feeling of this poem. It has a lot of charm. Bravo. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"Half a bubble past a pipe dream" Yes. Ida |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) you say so much in so few words ma'am..and there is the underlying humor that can't help but make me chuckle.. enjoyed! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Bastet-Thanks for the feed back, I'm glad you liked it. -------------------------------------------- Ida-I was pretty fond of that line myself, glad you like it too. ------------------------------------------- Chuckles-I'm delighted you get my humor and appreciate my distillings. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
oh my... chuckles, hair of the dog... you keep making up names for me and I will get a complex... |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Cpat sir...You already have a great complex (lol) and you display it in your magnificently intricate and complex poems |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
 I really like.-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eusta B...You have written a wonderous way to keep time...I like it!! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
rosepetals36-Thanks! --------------------------- Martie- Thanks for the read, I'm glad you liked it! |
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