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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-09-14 07:20 AM



we were just exchanging our handfuls of sand
touristing our skin roads back and forth
as if your phalloteasealogy required sordifying
for certification and we did require expertise

you made those strum kind of instrument sounds
and I was more the piston kind of percussion
you said you felt it in your toes when I was there
working my way up to take you over the edge

and you didn't mind the freefall you mentioned
leaving your lady like remote control outside
and just wearing crazy with nothing else over it
except my eyes and that thing I did with my hands

I was mostly speechless during your performance
except for guttural vulgarity which you looked up
in the adult dictionary to be sure of the meanings
and you read them out loud to me after to be sure

that everything intended was straight between us


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Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-09-14 08:08 AM


D- You leave little and yet everything to the imagination...You are the master of the Daark! ebm
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-09-14 11:54 AM


ms ebm...thanks lady
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2010-09-14 09:43 PM


Too too much, Mr. D!!!!

Only you would come up with a ladylike remote.
That is just so funny, you crack me up.

Hey maybe you should put a patent on it, ya think?

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-14-2010 10:16 PM).]

Earl Brinkman
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4 posted 2010-09-14 11:25 PM


Eveything intended was straight between us has taken on a new meaning.  I don`t think I need an adult dictionary to figure it out.  
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2010-09-15 06:00 AM


babyblue...I need to test it further...um, are you busy?  grin  thanks babe

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eb, thanks amigo...was way more innocent than it sounds.

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2010-09-15 07:20 AM


(chuckling) you do have a way of making everything sound like a seduction...
always enjoy sir...

Margherita
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7 posted 2010-09-15 08:36 AM


quote:
you said you felt it in your toes when I was there
working my way up to take you over the edge



You do make the toes wiggle with your seductive representation, playful and masterful.

Love,
Margherita

rosepetals36
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8 posted 2010-09-15 11:29 AM


Everyone else said what I wanted to say only better lol   I like!

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

bel1e
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9 posted 2010-09-15 11:48 AM


~~~ o f f the chain, darkie~~~~~  LOL

             

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2010-09-15 12:33 PM


Cpat, thanks amigo

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ms mar, thanks little lady friend

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rosepet, thank you for the smile

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bb-bel1e, thanks little one for the jingle

Martie
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11 posted 2010-09-15 04:02 PM


DS...You have written a whole new dictionary yourself.  I need a copy.  You got an extra?  
Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2010-09-15 04:42 PM


ms martie...lol

sure lil neighbor, swing on by and I will give you one with the good words already highlighted.  thanks babe!

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13 posted 2010-09-19 08:47 PM


Yep, I just want to know where I can buy this dictionary - you know, those words roll off my tongue, but I have no idea what they actually mean.

I love this one, D-man.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2010-09-20 05:44 AM


ms ali-san, thanks little one...
Honeybee
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15 posted 2010-09-20 09:08 PM


"and you didn't mind the freefall you mentioned
leaving your lady like remote control outside
and just wearing crazy with nothing else over it
except my eyes and that thing I did with my hands

I was mostly speechless during your performance
except for guttural vulgarity which you looked up
in the adult dictionary to be sure of the meanings
and you read them out loud to me after to be sure"
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Damn and wow! You are too friggen awesome for your own good! I really wish I could write more like you DS!

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2010-09-21 05:53 AM


ms honeybee...humble thanks ms....but you write lovely just like a honeybee should.


Balladeer
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17 posted 2010-09-21 07:51 AM


I'm guessing you were a tightrope walker in an earlier life? You handled this one brilliantly, dark one. Too many good lines to mention but images in the reader's minds are well-illustrated...an excellent, er, body of work
Dark Stranger
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18 posted 2010-09-21 10:03 AM


deer' thanks guy..I am blessed by your review
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