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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Wet yellow Orange and brown The fallen autumn leaves After rain always lie In the fenced in back yard The sky is forever Gray then blue White clouds like snowy Distant mountains eternally Drift across above a horizon line Made of house tops telephone wires And old oak trees I am waiting for you as before By the small one car garage You called for me and of course I came And there you are Your long blond hair Streaming again In the cold Clear October air There’s no need To hurry Why rush Take care I’m always here . |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very good. For this reader the clear-here rhyme nails it. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The moment captured very well with lovely lines of lonely beauty. Eric |
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