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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2010-09-11 07:10 PM


    Autumn Evening Forest    

Beyond a golden September
  setting sun
as the twilight curtain falls
on this forest evening world
painted in stars and velvet
  moonlit shadows,
all is mellifluous and
  melancholy beauty
for one, in vain, alone.

          --- b. e. adams (9/11/2010)



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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2010-09-12 04:05 AM


The rapturous beauty of your writing always over shadows the melancholy thought behind it, Bruce.
                          Ida

rosepetals36
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2 posted 2010-09-12 08:11 PM


You paint a pretty picture with your words

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

ethome
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3 posted 2010-09-13 02:50 AM


Beautiful with a stroke of reality there to brace up the lonely in beauty.

Eric

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2010-09-13 12:07 PM


You convey such peaceful beauty and a sense of lonliness that is hard to miss....

Truly gorgeous poetic scenery, as always.

Margherita
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5 posted 2010-09-13 05:54 PM


The blending of melancholy with beauty is so perfectly expressed here, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

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6 posted 2010-09-13 06:46 PM


Most things in nature are often best viewed alone. Being within it and solitary makes you appreciate it better as i appreciate this well written poem...thank you for it..

Goldenrose.

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7 posted 2010-09-19 07:25 PM


You sing the solo well, Bruce ~ with eloquence and beauty.

A

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