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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-09-09 07:23 PM


old boards of the wrinkle wood moan hollow and heavenly
like kentucky sighs with texas shine sip salvation
the laurel tree woman dances ballroom in her jaunty
bare foot in oh jesus jeans with sooth sin simmering

a lexes perhaps her smile, white wide  and classy cash
seduction with right wing kind of proper lady luxury
she waits for the neptune man to do his easy whispering
and take her away to promised lands without angry boarders

her fingers blend the dark brown buttons like jewelry
she wears the eyes of whispering knights in leather
like tattoos that wash off when she folds her prayers
into comfortable colors that are slow dancing persuasions

thunder leans at her alley brim on some monday mornings
she leans into the burgundy of dawn with fog stilettos
and climbs a gypsy wheeled mind like stairways to maybe
playing the hands she wears under her sleeves like aces

that make look back glances shimmer of gold coast religion

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2010-09-09 10:38 PM


Be careful, Sir...

The boards and others might be watching...



Of course, we know, you welcome windows.


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-09-10 12:58 PM


ms sun...thanks lady wit smile eyes
Eusta B. Mae
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3 posted 2010-09-10 08:20 AM


D-Part of your gift is the way you can paint women every color of the rainbow and capture every shadow of their shapes. Pen on Dark one! ebm
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-09-10 09:27 AM


ms ebm...thanks lady friend
Margherita
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5 posted 2010-09-11 04:38 PM


quote:
she leans into the burgundy of dawn with fog stilettos



Incredible imagery!

Fascinating read.


Love,
Margherita

Amaryllis
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6 posted 2010-09-12 02:26 AM


Mmm, another smooth one, Dark... jus so lovely  
~A

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2010-09-12 07:17 AM


ms mar, thanks lady friend


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a'mary, thanks for the eyes ms

Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2010-09-12 09:18 AM


as always ...well done sir.

such moments you paint with a sensual and delicate air...

truly enjoy your talent

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-09-12 09:41 AM


Cpat...humble thanks amigo
rosepetals36
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10 posted 2010-09-12 08:09 PM


I like as always

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

ethome
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11 posted 2010-09-13 02:53 AM


love your work as always.
Exceptional!

Eric

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2010-09-13 07:29 AM


rosepet...thanks so much lady

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et..thank you for the read and comment

Angel4aKing
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13 posted 2010-09-13 12:04 PM


This gave me chills I love it!!! Still listening for those whispers thru the screams that r heard so clearly. Great write as usual my dark stranger!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2010-09-13 01:09 PM


ms angel...thanks lady..enjoy the leather for the next few weeks?
BluesSerenade
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15 posted 2010-09-13 03:18 PM


thunder leans at her alley brim on some monday mornings
she leans into the burgundy of dawn with fog stilettos
and climbs a gypsy wheeled mind like stairways to maybe
playing the hands she wears under her sleeves like aces


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well heck you are so good!!

just hugs, big guy!!


Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2010-09-13 04:39 PM


babyblue...thanks lady friend
rwood
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17 posted 2010-09-17 05:56 AM


Your wordplay is magical. Truly a gift. There's always something there to ponder and collect as jewels of thought.
Dark Stranger
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18 posted 2010-09-17 06:43 AM


ms wood..thanks ms whispers..
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