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Eusta B. Mae
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0 posted 2010-09-09 08:21 AM




Crocheted tree green
Ruffles river bend side
Burnt umber churned earth
Seams thicket lined ditches
Wild Rose Brambles
Mary Jane weeds
Sunflowers scattered bowing
Dust rolling slowly
Softly billowing behind
Silhouettes indigo
Ink
An orange
Evening
Sky

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-09-2010 03:58 PM).]

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1 posted 2010-09-09 08:25 AM


(chuckling)  now..you have to watch those Mary Jane weeds... seems the DEA doesn't approve of them...

you paint an appealing set of images...and do it well here...

Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-09-09 08:44 AM


(Chuckling) ditch weed isn't good for anything.  I think the DEA leaves it to cross pollinate with anybody that tries to grow their own (LOL).  If they were serious about it they'd have to bust every farmer around.
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3 posted 2010-09-09 03:01 PM


Smiling...now gal, you should know that our weeds were once grown due to government specs for hemp rope. They just didn't know how to eradicate it entirely...  

But the entire scene is painted beautifully!


Eusta B. Mae
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4 posted 2010-09-09 03:09 PM


Sunshine! Thanks for taking in my scenery!
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5 posted 2010-09-09 09:23 PM


Good read my friend...by the way, I love your name.

jimmy

Eusta B. Mae
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6 posted 2010-09-10 08:31 AM


Thanks Jimmy! 'preciate the compliment on my name. Eusta B.
passing shadows
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7 posted 2010-09-11 01:23 AM


I saw me here

fantastic writing!

Amaryllis
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8 posted 2010-09-14 01:23 AM


*removed   Lol  sorry
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Eusta B. Mae
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9 posted 2010-09-14 08:19 AM


Amaryllis- No offense taken! I think it was great and I'm glad you had fun with it...that is what it is all about..you go girl!ebm

Eusta B. Mae
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10 posted 2010-09-14 09:24 AM


passing shadows-I wondered who that was playing around out there! ebm

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11 posted 2010-09-14 11:12 AM


A nice picture you painted with words

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

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