navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » letting go
Open Poetry #46
Post A Reply Post New Topic letting go Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2010-11-09 09:05 PM



Children grow and no one knows
at their birth where their lives will go
we hold them close when they are scared
when they are just two years old
when they are three we leave the light on
to scare the ghosties away
not a night goes by
at four or five
when you don't wake up
with them in your bed
the sleepovers at six, seven and eight
that you think will never end
the questions you never thought they'd ask
at the way too young age of ten
before your eyes they'e growing up
and now are facing the world on thier own
with so many dreams still so ripe
going into a world that's already torn...

~~~kingsangel~~~

© Copyright 2010 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2010-11-09 09:11 PM


wonderful summery of the tender years, kingsangel. I know of no one who could bright those years to life better than this. Excellent writing.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2010-11-09 09:19 PM


Why thank you so much for your kind words.....I have kids that range in age from 18 years to 16 months....was having a moment of reflection I guess....

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2010-11-09 09:30 PM


ms king...people puppies are always special when we look at them through look back eyes...enjoyed your fragile here ms
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
4 posted 2010-11-09 09:32 PM


....and that's the way life is, Julie. You say it well...
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
5 posted 2010-11-10 12:06 PM


Thanks a bunch you are both very kind and to be graced by the presence of you both at the same time I feel special...

~~~kingsangel~~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2010-11-10 06:51 AM


thanks for the second read LOL
I might even come back for a third


Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903

7 posted 2010-11-10 08:44 AM


That is the best "been there done that" as only a mom can write.  I've got a 32-13 yr spread between my 3 kids... I know where you are coming from. Great write! ebm
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
8 posted 2010-11-10 09:59 AM


Bravo! Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » letting go

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary